I believe this captures the feeling of a meltdown, when the demands of conformity in an office setting and the buzzing bright overhead lights become too much to bear and it feels like you're on fire.
Feedback is how I improve. As Extra Credits says, "Fail faster. No idea is made fully formed. Your ideas can't be precious. Your ego can't need protecting. Every failure is a chance to get it right."
Go right ahead! I'd also be happy to make small alterations for you, if you specify what you'd like. You can do that here.
I'm currently seeking people who want to be part of a nonprofit focusing on disabled-first design and radical accessibility. This project is on the list for what we make there. If you want to join, please get in touch!